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But I'm afraid it makes me want to reconsider my use of time.
I sensed that I was getting carried away with unusual phrase lengths, and decided to go back to basics to see if I could write a tune with a conventional structure and no syncopations etc. but still have something about it.I've complained in the past of not wanting to play tunes where you can predict what happens next. But now I've written one myself.It's called Vanilla March, and fits quite well under the hands.Agamemnon started with the opening leitmotif from Elektra.Any guesses where the first 4 notes of this tune come from?
Good guess, and as right as anything. But think clarinet!