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I sensed that I was getting carried away with unusual phrase lengths, and decided to go back to basics to see if I could write a tune with a conventional structure and no syncopations etc. but still have something about it.I've complained in the past of not wanting to play tunes where you can predict what happens next. But now I've written one myself.It's called Vanilla March, and fits quite well under the hands.
By the way, it is easy for me to transpose these for other boxes - so rather than individuals writing them out again - just ask for a particular key. It's a 5 minute job to transpose and upload.